My Best Film Essay

Introduction

(a)Catch ‘em including text and author/director           (b)Thesis/Re-stating of essay question           (c)List of points                       Start writing here: The “power of one” director John G. avildsen uses a wide array of techniques in this filme. Some of the techniques i found to be important includes symbolism,foreshadowing,flashback and camera shots.

Body

(a) Statement of a film techniques/aspect (b) Example/Evidence (c) eXplanation of EFFECT on audience - what does it make us think or feel?     And remember to answer the essay question! (d) eXplanation of director’s PURPOSE                                    (e) eXplanation of COMBINED ASPECTS - how does it work with other aspects?           (f) Your link - with evidence - how does it connect somewhere else?                                symbolism plays an important part in the film.For example P.K was scared of elephants because his father was killed by one. And when P.K finally overcomes his fear of them, it shows us the audience that he has a new found courage. it makes the audience feel happy for P.K that he finally overcame his fear of elephants.  This showed us that we do not need to fear them but we should respect them instead.  This links with the “hang em up” scene because he needed a lot of courage to push the bully over onto the nazi flag.  Progressions: Overall Grade: Level 3 Indicators L M H Level 4 Indicators L M H Level 5 Indicators L M H Level 6 Indicators L M H Ideas/Purposes and Audiences Nb* L=Low M=Medium H=High SEXY SEXXY or SEXXXY! I have expressed ideas and used statements, evidence, and explanations and attempted to answer the question with some aspects of SEXY paragraphs. I have shown commitment and resilience in my learning by adding or changing details to support my ideas. I have formed and communicated ideas by using statements, evidence, and explanations and attempted to answer the question with SEXY paragraphs. I have shown commitment and resilience to my learning by adding or changing details to support my ideas. I show increasingly comprehensive ideas by using statements, evidence, and explanations correctly to answer the question in  1-2 SEXY paragraphs. I have developed my  ideas by adding details or making links to the text, other texts, society, or the world. I show comprehensive ideas by using statements, evidence, and explanations correctly to answer the question in 3 or more SEXY paragraphs. I have worked towards creating a coherent, planned whole essay by adding details to ideas or making links to the text, other texts, society, or the world. Ideas/Purposes And Audiences Grade: L M H L M H L M H L M H Language Features (Persuasive, filmic, or written, depending upon the essay.) I have used Google add-ons, extensions, and apps to proofread and edit my work I have used descriptive words and language features to engage interest and communicate meaning. I have used grammatical and spelling conventions, appropriately and with increasing accuracy. I have used a range of descriptive words and language features to create meaning and effect and to sustain interest. I have used grammatical and spelling conventions, appropriately and with only a few intrusive errors. I have used a wide range of descriptive words and language features with control to create meaning and effect and to sustain interest. I have used an increasing range of words and  grammatical and spelling conventions  appropriately, effectively, and with accuracy. I have used a wide range of descriptive words and language features with control to create meaning and effect and to sustain interest. I have used grammatical and spelling conventions  appropriately, effectively, and with accuracy. Language Features Grade: L M H L M H L M H L M H Structure I have achieved sequences my ideas with SEXY paragraphs. I may have linked my paragraphs, and have an intro, body, and conclusion. I have achieved some coherence through sequencing my ideas with SEXY paragraphs. I may have linked my paragraphs, and have an intro, body, and conclusion. I have achieved a sense of coherence through developing my ideas with SEXY paragraphs. I probably have linked my paragraphs, and have an intro, body, and conclusion. I have achieved a sense of coherence through developing my ideas with SEXY paragraphs. I probably have linked my paragraphs, and an intro, body, and conclusion. Structure Grade: L M H L M H L M H L M H